Rowboat
Thursday, May 7, 2009
Rowboat
Clinging to this rock
can’t see in the dark.
Hear sick
white horses
galloping unshackled
and words
bend
truth like
waves bend
wood
on the rattling waters.
Words are like sparks of light. Here are some I tried to catch and tame...
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May 14, 2009 at 3:11 AM
I really like this one.
July 1, 2009 at 10:01 PM
Heya, this is Innit! I tried really hard to find an email addy on your blog but no luck :( Anyway I won't be on blip as much as before but if you'd like to keep in contact I have AIM or my email is innit@innit4u.com
July 19, 2009 at 5:32 PM
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July 19, 2009 at 5:35 PM
"words bend truth like waves bend wood"—that's awesome!
ulsen (via blip.fm)
July 24, 2009 at 3:06 AM
Hi fellow blipper ! I had no idea you were such a talented poet. Looks like Haïkus ! Nice !